the warrior's sword
feels foreign in hand
hiding shielded for so long
his stance uncertain
but determined
weary of wanting more
when the taking
was his
all along
loaded for bear
tentative steps
lead him to intented
salvation
okay..still commenting..but i wanted to agree with Pat -- i'm just picking them randomly to read but there are definite themes -- some more angry, others more pensive and reflective....
Dude, seriously is there nothing you can't bring alive with your words...well done.
ReplyDeleteA different feel for sure. Still, it's beauty. It would be great if combined with others of the same type. Maybe a themed grouping...
ReplyDeletei'm in love
ReplyDeleteokay..still commenting..but i wanted to agree with Pat -- i'm just picking them randomly to read but there are definite themes -- some more angry, others more pensive and reflective....
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